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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Soul-Searching

    that was really kinda dark. Ny'ways, still loved it. just, try not to make it sound so emo. Not that emo is bad, I just don't think it was your ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter 6 of Wrong Or Right

    I like the series(i'm gonna call it that), but you really need to WRITE-MORE-SO-YOU DON'T-KEEP-MAKING-US-SUSPENSFUL!! Please and thank you.

    May 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Body heat 9a love poem)

    It was enjoyable. I really couldn't quite catch the flow of it, but the descriptivness was great. I could feel it coming striaght from your heart, and thats all that ...

    May 7, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter 5 of Wrong or Right

    AHHH! Why must you tease us with just writing a little bit. This earns a gold star. I need the next chapter please. 8)

    May 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: May I Have This Dance

    It was good. *gives gold star for da heck of romantic poetry* i enjoyed reading and feeling how much love is in two people.

    May 4, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Rin, Part Two (Erm, in a way)

    Wow. that is an awesome story. you are a very talented writer. plaese post the next chapter.

    May 2, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter 4 of Wrong or Right

    Please, write more! This story is so addicting that I want to see what happens!

    Apr 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: why?

    Talk about the drama! nice job. I liked the flow and it was really unique.

    Apr 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: His

    Whoa. I really liked the beat of the poem. You had me hooked from the first two sentances. I really liked the last part of it. Unexpected. Nice. *gives gold ...

    Apr 28, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forgiveness

    Okay, first, I agree to Echolair. The 'poor me' thing, was really good. I just have one question, did you actually kill someone? Besides that, the length wasn't that bad, ...

    Apr 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You make me want to...

    is it about draco Nope, sorry though :). Awww, that's a sweet poem! It conveyed cutesy romantic feelings AND it had a nice flow and rhythm, which isn't always present ...

    Apr 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Tiny Hands, Tiny Feet

    Wow. I cried. seriously, I cried. That was a very good poem to make me cry. :smt088

    Apr 23, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Freeing the Bluejay

    Wow. Thats all I can say, wow. I really liked it because it was sad and enjoyable at the same time. poor bird.

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Approval

    I liked it because I could feel the emotion. The words really fit together well in the sentences. Great Job!

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Three steps ahead

    Hey thanks. I really know what you mean, I'll try to fix that.

    Apr 20, 2008


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