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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Soul-Searching

    that was really kinda dark. Ny'ways, still loved it. just, try not to make it sound so emo. Not that emo is bad, I just don't think it was your ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter 6 of Wrong Or Right

    I like the series(i'm gonna call it that), but you really need to WRITE-MORE-SO-YOU DON'T-KEEP-MAKING-US-SUSPENSFUL!! Please and thank you.

    May 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Body heat 9a love poem)

    It was enjoyable. I really couldn't quite catch the flow of it, but the descriptivness was great. I could feel it coming striaght from your heart, and thats all that ...

    May 7, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter 5 of Wrong or Right

    AHHH! Why must you tease us with just writing a little bit. This earns a gold star. I need the next chapter please. 8)

    May 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: May I Have This Dance

    It was good. *gives gold star for da heck of romantic poetry* i enjoyed reading and feeling how much love is in two people.

    May 4, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Rin, Part Two (Erm, in a way)

    Wow. that is an awesome story. you are a very talented writer. plaese post the next chapter.

    May 2, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter 4 of Wrong or Right

    Please, write more! This story is so addicting that I want to see what happens!

    Apr 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: why?

    Talk about the drama! nice job. I liked the flow and it was really unique.

    Apr 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: His

    Whoa. I really liked the beat of the poem. You had me hooked from the first two sentances. I really liked the last part of it. Unexpected. Nice. *gives gold ...

    Apr 28, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forgiveness

    Okay, first, I agree to Echolair. The 'poor me' thing, was really good. I just have one question, did you actually kill someone? Besides that, the length wasn't that bad, ...

    Apr 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You make me want to...

    is it about draco Nope, sorry though :). Awww, that's a sweet poem! It conveyed cutesy romantic feelings AND it had a nice flow and rhythm, which isn't always present ...

    Apr 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Tiny Hands, Tiny Feet

    Wow. I cried. seriously, I cried. That was a very good poem to make me cry. :smt088

    Apr 23, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Freeing the Bluejay

    Wow. Thats all I can say, wow. I really liked it because it was sad and enjoyable at the same time. poor bird.

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Approval

    I liked it because I could feel the emotion. The words really fit together well in the sentences. Great Job!

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Three steps ahead

    Hey thanks. I really know what you mean, I'll try to fix that.

    Apr 20, 2008


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings